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Hmm, a little bland... and I don't really think the 'camp' font at the top really suits the whole Sega image at all. I agree that the middle one looks the best, but the kerning really needs work (on all of them, actually), and I don't think the italic font really works with the one on the left... additionally, is that X from a different font as well? Also, you can clearly see that the outline is uneven - that needs to be smoothed out or built by hand.
Anyway, I'm sorry if I'm being too critical, I just like typography a lot, and so I'm pretty picky about this sort of thing. |