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| Cloud121 - Oct 5, 2003 |
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IceDigger | Oct 5, 2003 | ||
| Can I be in it? :banana | ||||
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Gallstaff | Oct 7, 2003 | ||
| Heh you should put everyone (the cool ones ((like me)) ) on sx into the fanfic somehow. | ||||
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sizone | Oct 8, 2003 | ||
| fanfic is pure evil. lemme give you an idea QUIT NOW WHILE YOU'RE AHEAD! | ||||
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Cloud121 | Oct 8, 2003 | ||
You saying MY fanfic is evil? Or just fanfiction has a whole? I'm you're just saying mine, thanks for your input :flamethrower: :huh  :smash :bs :argue :rant :looney :blah  Eidt: I was talking to some friends of mine (the "Gothic" kind of people), and they're all like "Put us in as vampires and we just go on a rampage killing everyone, then you and Cloud face us in a 3 page or os epic battle!" Mike wants the Gunblade (Squall's weapon), and Josh wants the Masamune (Sephiroth's version). Although I'd personally prefer the Dual Masamune that Edge had in FFIV  But then again, I got Ultima Weapon. I don't need any other sword  :bow :bow :bow | ||||
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Nadius | Dec 5, 2003 | ||
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I was trying to get started on your story, Zio Trilogy: Part II. But I struggled mightily. Well I didn't struggle, really. Your story just doesn't have a flow to it. There were many periods. Sentences were too short. You stated too many facts. You need to connect sentences together. Sometimes they seemed to end abruptly. Might I send you a helpful link? Conjunctions.... edit: btw, the dialogue is fine, don't touch that. Just fix your narration. | ||||
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Cloud121 | Dec 7, 2003 | ||
| Hm... I usually try to connect my sentences, however, I tend to change the subject pretty quickly, so I have to throw in all those periods. Whenever I connect the sentences, I either run on for TOO long, or they're so short, I can just put in a period and it's fine. Also, when you say my story has no flow to it? What do you mean exactly? I'm not upset/offended or anything, I'm always open to criticism. Please state what exactly you meant by that. Are you talking of all the periods and such? The lack of connecting words? | ||||
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it290 | Dec 7, 2003 | ||
| I suggest you have Rolf come in and beat the hell out of Cloud. No offense. | ||||
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Nadius | Dec 9, 2003 | |||
Yeah, sorry, that's what I meant. I can't say much about the story, since I haven't really read it all the way through. | |||||
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Cloud121 | Dec 19, 2003 | ||
| Hey guys! I'm finally getting around to adding more stuff to my fic. I just need WordPerfect... | ||||
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muffinman943 | Dec 29, 2003 | ||
| make it a hentai adventure, | ||||
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Cloud121 | Dec 29, 2003 | ||
Uh.... I actually did that once (in a way) with an older one. It didn't turn out right. It was cheesy as hell, and Nadius would've had a nightmare reading it, as there were probably more periods in that, than in my current  :lol: It's name? Zio Trilogy Part I..... Heh... there really is no Part I to the Zio Trilogy as of yet. Zio Trilogy is the sequel to my Sephiroth Trilogy. Now THOSE were some cheesy fics.... | ||||
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ratfish | Feb 2, 2004 | ||
| One word, doujinshi. :banana | ||||
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Protosstic | Apr 26, 2004 | ||
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It's been a while Cloud, will we see a return of Sega Fan Fiction? I hope so!! | ||||
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Cloud121 | Apr 30, 2004 | ||
| Yeah.. I hope so anyway. I haven't worked on my current one (the one on the site) in nearly a year. Laziness.... | ||||
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Cloud121 | Jun 14, 2004 | ||
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Well guys! It's summer time! Time to work on my fic! Time to amass all the ideas I've gotten over the past year, and put 'em together! Hopefully laziness won't get me this time.... | ||||